• Story: Flowers and a Letter (Update Chapter 2!)

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    [Shipping] Some Twilight and Fluttershy stuff with a few other ponies thrown into the mix!  Author doesn't speak English as his primary language so go easy on the grammar!

    Author: A.n.B. 
    Description: Twilight was just about to study the flowers she gathered but she is interrupted by a sudden discovery. (mild shipping)
    Flowers and a Letter
    Flowers and Guilt  (New!)
    Monday, February 28, 2011 op
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    24 comments:

    1. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2011 at 4:42 PM

      Well, Fluttershy sure jumped the gun on that one, lol.

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    2. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2011 at 5:45 PM

      @Anonymous Well she isn't that far of the truth. Rainbow Dash has heavily implied that she seen Twilight as a lover. But I agree that Fluttershy acted far too brashly for her own good.

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    3. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2011 at 5:53 PM

      Yeah, Rainbow did make her feelings pretty obvious, but Twilight never gave any indication whether she felt the same way or not. Fluttershy probably at least should've waited to find that out before she packed up and just left.

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    4. PacceFebruary 25, 2011 at 9:26 PM

      I'm going to guess that English isn't your first language and I know it can be damn hard to express oneself in their own language, let alone someone else's.
      But beyond that, I'd say it's a good effort. Keep writing.

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    5. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2011 at 9:49 PM

      The description up above for this fic indicates as much; English isn't the author's first language.

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    6. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2011 at 10:06 PM

      Really cute I hope that we get to see a second part

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    7. BenXFebruary 25, 2011 at 10:34 PM

      Really cute story, but the end made me sad.

      The only problem I found was that it's really fast.

      Don't get me wrong, I like short stories, but you tried to do a lot in a really short period of time.

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    8. A.n.B.February 26, 2011 at 5:13 AM

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    9. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2011 at 6:50 AM

      It really does need a second chapter.

      Twilight's emotional state is pretty up in the air, even ignoring the fact she's being an ingrate the entire time.

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    10. ZarkanorfFebruary 26, 2011 at 11:27 AM

      I'm really hoping this one isn't a one-shot, because it really leaves off at a cliffhanger and would be kind of choppy, especially Fluttershy's reaction to the situation. This story really could use a second chapter to help it out.

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    11. A.n.B.February 26, 2011 at 3:42 PM

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    12. A.n.B.February 28, 2011 at 12:07 PM

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    13. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2011 at 1:28 PM

      Good job, why make a difficult choice if you can just take a third option? No, seriously, the conclusion to the whole thing was just as surprising as it was pleasant to read. Nice work.

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    14. Splash BlueFebruary 28, 2011 at 3:24 PM

      I was not expecting the chapter to end like that. I think Twilight learned an important lesson, though: you never really appreciate the things you have until you lose them.

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    15. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2011 at 3:36 PM

      Twilight had the right idea, besides there's still Pinkie and Applejack... no wait they just hooked up looks like your stuck with the unloved rarity of the group. (Not that the word rarity is not capitilized for a reason)

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    16. Auta ManeFebruary 28, 2011 at 4:31 PM

      Or there's always Derpy or Zecora or Big Mac or Carrot or OPPP...

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    17. MuffinFebruary 28, 2011 at 9:00 PM

      what a TWEEST!

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    18. flashfox466February 28, 2011 at 11:04 PM

      Rainbow Dash: I got my heart broken by Twilight Sparkle.
      Fluttershy: I also got my heart broken by Twilight Sparkle.
      Rainbow Dash: Wanna make out?
      Fluttershy: Hell yes!
      Twilight Sparkle: Why is it all the girls that fall for me eventually turn into lesbians? ...oh wait

      TWILIGHT SPARKLE, BRINGING PONIES TOGETHER!

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    19. AnonymousMarch 1, 2011 at 6:58 AM

      Is this a new meme? Cause I can get behind a 'Screw Twilight' reoccurring thematic.

      I remember another story where Twilight went out on a limb and also ended watching people she might have been falling for making out in the distance. It's not like the series doesn't already go out of it's way to hurt her, no reason the fanbase shouldn't also.

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    20. A.n.B.March 1, 2011 at 8:53 AM

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    21. AnonymousMarch 1, 2011 at 12:04 PM

      @A.n.B.
      Tear streaming Twilight Sparkle is the one true Twilight Sparkle.

      Accept no imitations.

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    22. DooDawDayMay 15, 2011 at 10:27 PM

      I don't normally comment on grammar and stuff, but this was pretty hard to ignore. The story was there, the characters are there and as far as I can tell, this is gonna end pretty well. So, I will assume that English is a second language for the author and read on!
      ON TO CHAPTER TWO!

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    23. AnonymousJune 4, 2011 at 6:54 PM

      Grammar needs help get a god editor that will help ALOT I'm sure you could find one here or on ponychan.

      More importantly this was a DAMN good story, don't hesitate to write more.

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    24. BRONY4EVRSeptember 5, 2011 at 12:38 AM

      That was good, my one problem was that RBD didn't want to find Fluttershy at first. Rainbow IS the element of LOYALTY. Other than that, good job.

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