• Story: Flowers and a Letter (Update Chapter 2!)

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    [Shipping] Some Twilight and Fluttershy stuff with a few other ponies thrown into the mix!  Author doesn't speak English as his primary language so go easy on the grammar!

    Author: A.n.B. 
    Description: Twilight was just about to study the flowers she gathered but she is interrupted by a sudden discovery. (mild shipping)
    Flowers and a Letter
    Flowers and Guilt  (New!)
    esmaspäev, 28. veebruar 2011 op
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    24 kommentaari:

    1. Anonüümne25. veebruar 2011, kell 16:42

      Well, Fluttershy sure jumped the gun on that one, lol.

      VastaKustuta
    2. Anonüümne25. veebruar 2011, kell 17:45

      @Anonymous Well she isn't that far of the truth. Rainbow Dash has heavily implied that she seen Twilight as a lover. But I agree that Fluttershy acted far too brashly for her own good.

      VastaKustuta
    3. Anonüümne25. veebruar 2011, kell 17:53

      Yeah, Rainbow did make her feelings pretty obvious, but Twilight never gave any indication whether she felt the same way or not. Fluttershy probably at least should've waited to find that out before she packed up and just left.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Pacce25. veebruar 2011, kell 21:26

      I'm going to guess that English isn't your first language and I know it can be damn hard to express oneself in their own language, let alone someone else's.
      But beyond that, I'd say it's a good effort. Keep writing.

      VastaKustuta
    5. Anonüümne25. veebruar 2011, kell 21:49

      The description up above for this fic indicates as much; English isn't the author's first language.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Anonüümne25. veebruar 2011, kell 22:06

      Really cute I hope that we get to see a second part

      VastaKustuta
    7. BenX25. veebruar 2011, kell 22:34

      Really cute story, but the end made me sad.

      The only problem I found was that it's really fast.

      Don't get me wrong, I like short stories, but you tried to do a lot in a really short period of time.

      VastaKustuta
    8. A.n.B.26. veebruar 2011, kell 05:13

      Autor on selle kommentaari eemaldanud.

      VastaKustuta
    9. Anonüümne26. veebruar 2011, kell 06:50

      It really does need a second chapter.

      Twilight's emotional state is pretty up in the air, even ignoring the fact she's being an ingrate the entire time.

      VastaKustuta
    10. Zarkanorf26. veebruar 2011, kell 11:27

      I'm really hoping this one isn't a one-shot, because it really leaves off at a cliffhanger and would be kind of choppy, especially Fluttershy's reaction to the situation. This story really could use a second chapter to help it out.

      VastaKustuta
    11. A.n.B.26. veebruar 2011, kell 15:42

      Autor on selle kommentaari eemaldanud.

      VastaKustuta
    12. A.n.B.28. veebruar 2011, kell 12:07

      Autor on selle kommentaari eemaldanud.

      VastaKustuta
    13. Anonüümne28. veebruar 2011, kell 13:28

      Good job, why make a difficult choice if you can just take a third option? No, seriously, the conclusion to the whole thing was just as surprising as it was pleasant to read. Nice work.

      VastaKustuta
    14. Splash Blue28. veebruar 2011, kell 15:24

      I was not expecting the chapter to end like that. I think Twilight learned an important lesson, though: you never really appreciate the things you have until you lose them.

      VastaKustuta
    15. Anonüümne28. veebruar 2011, kell 15:36

      Twilight had the right idea, besides there's still Pinkie and Applejack... no wait they just hooked up looks like your stuck with the unloved rarity of the group. (Not that the word rarity is not capitilized for a reason)

      VastaKustuta
    16. Auta Mane28. veebruar 2011, kell 16:31

      Or there's always Derpy or Zecora or Big Mac or Carrot or OPPP...

      VastaKustuta
    17. Muffin28. veebruar 2011, kell 21:00

      what a TWEEST!

      VastaKustuta
    18. flashfox46628. veebruar 2011, kell 23:04

      Rainbow Dash: I got my heart broken by Twilight Sparkle.
      Fluttershy: I also got my heart broken by Twilight Sparkle.
      Rainbow Dash: Wanna make out?
      Fluttershy: Hell yes!
      Twilight Sparkle: Why is it all the girls that fall for me eventually turn into lesbians? ...oh wait

      TWILIGHT SPARKLE, BRINGING PONIES TOGETHER!

      VastaKustuta
    19. Anonüümne1. märts 2011, kell 06:58

      Is this a new meme? Cause I can get behind a 'Screw Twilight' reoccurring thematic.

      I remember another story where Twilight went out on a limb and also ended watching people she might have been falling for making out in the distance. It's not like the series doesn't already go out of it's way to hurt her, no reason the fanbase shouldn't also.

      VastaKustuta
    20. A.n.B.1. märts 2011, kell 08:53

      Autor on selle kommentaari eemaldanud.

      VastaKustuta
    21. Anonüümne1. märts 2011, kell 12:04

      @A.n.B.
      Tear streaming Twilight Sparkle is the one true Twilight Sparkle.

      Accept no imitations.

      VastaKustuta
    22. DooDawDay15. mai 2011, kell 22:27

      I don't normally comment on grammar and stuff, but this was pretty hard to ignore. The story was there, the characters are there and as far as I can tell, this is gonna end pretty well. So, I will assume that English is a second language for the author and read on!
      ON TO CHAPTER TWO!

      VastaKustuta
    23. Anonüümne4. juuni 2011, kell 18:54

      Grammar needs help get a god editor that will help ALOT I'm sure you could find one here or on ponychan.

      More importantly this was a DAMN good story, don't hesitate to write more.

      VastaKustuta
    24. BRONY4EVR5. september 2011, kell 00:38

      That was good, my one problem was that RBD didn't want to find Fluttershy at first. Rainbow IS the element of LOYALTY. Other than that, good job.

      VastaKustuta

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