• Story: Cupcake's Day Out

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    [Grimdark] Speaking of toys, and Cupcakes, someone wrote a story about that recolor toy that was posted a while back.  I am going to use this pie pony as a place holder because I don't think the recolor actually exists in the show! So.. enjoy the story!
    Description: CUPCAKE is good at just about everything she does. It just takes a little practice, some hard work, and maybe a bit of luck!
    Cupcake's Day Out
    Tuesday, February 22, 2011 op
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    21 comments:

    1. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2011 at 8:34 PM

      >"this pie pony"
      >implying that's not granny smith in her younger years

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    2. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2011 at 8:44 PM

      cupcake's day out
      but
      if rainbow dash has become a cupcake
      how can she move?

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    3. MuffinFebruary 22, 2011 at 8:49 PM

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    4. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2011 at 8:50 PM

      @Anonymous
      Whoa.
      You, sir, just blew my mind.

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    5. MuffinFebruary 22, 2011 at 9:01 PM

      First I was like: WTF?, This is ridiculous
      But then I B'awwd

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    6. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2011 at 9:05 PM

      Wow. I was hoping it would end with a wake up or 'it was all a dream', but not that! I feel this deserves a grimdark tag, blog brony.

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    7. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2011 at 9:51 PM

      Its like someone took the characters from Twilight and the ending from shutter island and replaced everything with ponies. Great read though. Seconding Grimdark tag.

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    8. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2011 at 11:27 PM

      oh, oh wow. i feel dirty after that.

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    9. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2011 at 11:51 PM

      @Anonymous

      Actually when I was writing this I was sorta' inspired by the movie "The Cabaret of Dr Caligari". It's an old black and white flick worth anyone's time who wishes to see it. Have not seen or read Twilight though, so I'm not too sure what you mean there. Glad you enjoy it. :)

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    10. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2011 at 12:10 AM

      I had a feeling there was going to be a twist ending... but that was just too... sad...

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    11. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2011 at 7:09 AM

      Heartbreaking, truly heartbreaking. You did well, and I commend you, though I still feel a little like crying.

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    12. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2011 at 11:16 PM

      That brought a tear to my eye, few things are able to do that, well done!

      Id love to see more of this, maybe even a bawww category. It's nice to see something other than shipping fics

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    13. Albatross !!z0yT7Pqnr+yFebruary 27, 2011 at 12:52 PM

      I see what you did there.
      Liking this.

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    14. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2011 at 9:33 PM

      read it through a second time, it was even sadder.

      did anyone think cloud duster was an abusive boyfriend at first that the whole town was afraid of?

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    15. AnonymousJune 9, 2011 at 1:49 AM

      woah. hardcore.

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    16. ItsTheWhinyGuysJune 30, 2011 at 10:38 AM

      Aww, poor Cupcake! Hopefully she can make a recovery...

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    17. ItsTheWhinyGuysJune 30, 2011 at 10:39 AM

      Hey, a few questions for Sethisto (assuming he sees this):

      Why isn't this showing up in the story archive?

      Wouldn't this be more "sad" than "grimdark"?

      Here's a cupcake image you could use for this:
      http://durpy.deviantart.com/art/Cupcake-212366762

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    18. Alex WarlornJune 30, 2011 at 12:18 PM

      Princess Luna sees all beneath her moon we can assume, I wonder what she thinks of this poor mad pony?

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    19. Alex WarlornJune 30, 2011 at 12:19 PM

      P.S. After all, another word for a mad person is 'lunatic.'

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    20. AnonymousAugust 3, 2011 at 10:16 PM

      That's some good story. Nicely sad, with just a touch of totally hopeless. Some people say the end is telegraphed too much, but I thought it worked out pretty well.

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    21. CraftyWolfApril 2, 2012 at 8:51 AM

      That was excellently written! I don't usually read stories about anyone but actual characters, but this was definitely worth the read

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