Description: CUPCAKE is good at just about everything she does. It just takes a little practice, some hard work, and maybe a bit of luck!Cupcake's Day Out
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[Grimdark] Speaking of toys, and Cupcakes, someone wrote a story about that recolor toy that was posted a while back. I am going to use this pie pony as a place holder because I don't think the recolor actually exists in the show! So.. enjoy the story!
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>"this pie pony"
VastaKustuta>implying that's not granny smith in her younger years
cupcake's day out
VastaKustutabut
if rainbow dash has become a cupcake
how can she move?
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VastaKustuta@Anonymous
VastaKustutaWhoa.
You, sir, just blew my mind.
First I was like: WTF?, This is ridiculous
VastaKustutaBut then I B'awwd
Wow. I was hoping it would end with a wake up or 'it was all a dream', but not that! I feel this deserves a grimdark tag, blog brony.
VastaKustutaIts like someone took the characters from Twilight and the ending from shutter island and replaced everything with ponies. Great read though. Seconding Grimdark tag.
VastaKustutaoh, oh wow. i feel dirty after that.
VastaKustuta@Anonymous
VastaKustutaActually when I was writing this I was sorta' inspired by the movie "The Cabaret of Dr Caligari". It's an old black and white flick worth anyone's time who wishes to see it. Have not seen or read Twilight though, so I'm not too sure what you mean there. Glad you enjoy it. :)
I had a feeling there was going to be a twist ending... but that was just too... sad...
VastaKustutaHeartbreaking, truly heartbreaking. You did well, and I commend you, though I still feel a little like crying.
VastaKustutaThat brought a tear to my eye, few things are able to do that, well done!
VastaKustutaId love to see more of this, maybe even a bawww category. It's nice to see something other than shipping fics
I see what you did there.
VastaKustutaLiking this.
read it through a second time, it was even sadder.
VastaKustutadid anyone think cloud duster was an abusive boyfriend at first that the whole town was afraid of?
woah. hardcore.
VastaKustutaAww, poor Cupcake! Hopefully she can make a recovery...
VastaKustutaHey, a few questions for Sethisto (assuming he sees this):
VastaKustutaWhy isn't this showing up in the story archive?
Wouldn't this be more "sad" than "grimdark"?
Here's a cupcake image you could use for this:
http://durpy.deviantart.com/art/Cupcake-212366762
Princess Luna sees all beneath her moon we can assume, I wonder what she thinks of this poor mad pony?
VastaKustutaP.S. After all, another word for a mad person is 'lunatic.'
VastaKustutaThat's some good story. Nicely sad, with just a touch of totally hopeless. Some people say the end is telegraphed too much, but I thought it worked out pretty well.
VastaKustutaThat was excellently written! I don't usually read stories about anyone but actual characters, but this was definitely worth the read
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