• Story: Crossette

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    [Normal] It must suck to be an earth pony living in equestria. That has to be the worst luck imaginable.
    Summary: A Wonder bolt fan earth filly wishes she could fly.
    Crossette
    Sunday, February 6, 2011 op
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    8 comments:

    1. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2011 at 8:16 AM

      It's based on a supposedly true story.
      Some guy at /co/ recounted how Thunderbirds did similar stunt while he was alone on a hill, waving at them. Quite damn awesome if it's true.

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    2. HFPSFebruary 6, 2011 at 11:22 AM

      It was. That doesn't count as self-insert, does it? Just writing what I know.

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    3. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2011 at 11:23 AM

      It was. That doesn't count as self-insert, does it? Just writing what I know.

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    4. Fairy SlayerFebruary 6, 2011 at 3:55 PM

      Regardless, it was a sweet and simple little tale fit to the MLP:FiM world. Generic... okay. (The Thunderbirds story is implausible, but it's fine for a cute and personalized fanfic.)

      It could use a touch more polishing, but as a oneshot we can't expect hardcore vetting or whatnot. (So I won't nitpick. ;) ) It's also nice to see that you're throwing some shorter tales in along with the much longer pieces.

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    5. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2011 at 6:50 PM

      Yeah, well, I wrote it stream of consciousness style "five minute fluff" in a few minutes when somebody challenged me to write something fluffy.

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    6. Danfish77May 10, 2011 at 12:52 AM

      Would have been nice to see Crossette suddenly get her cutie mark, something impossible like wings or clouds to make it just a bit tragic to pluck at the ol' heartstrings.

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    7. shazb0tJune 11, 2011 at 3:50 PM

      Another one that "Does not exist." I think this one might've gotten taken down in the Google kerfuffle a little while ago.

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    8. DarthVaderSeptember 24, 2011 at 8:40 PM

      Anyone have a link?

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