• Story: Checking Out

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    [Shipping] A title with multiple meanings? I think it was intended!
    Description: Dash has a hunger that must be satisfied.
    Checking Out (docs)
    Checking Out (Deviant Art)
    Sunday, February 20, 2011 op
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    15 comments:

    1. AnonymousFebruary 20, 2011 at 1:27 PM

      What is this
      I don't even.

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    2. MuffinFebruary 20, 2011 at 2:15 PM

      Oh, Derpy...

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    3. Dammig/DammirFebruary 20, 2011 at 3:00 PM

      That story was kinda cute ^^

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    4. AnonymousFebruary 20, 2011 at 3:26 PM

      What in the HELL is with you bronies? You are absolutely obsesses with lesbianism and ponies fucking.

      Jeez you're messed up. Why can't you just watch the damn cartoon?

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    5. AnonymousFebruary 20, 2011 at 4:18 PM

      Haha, this was cute as hell.

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    6. AnonymousFebruary 20, 2011 at 4:53 PM

      d'awwwwed

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    7. AnonymousFebruary 20, 2011 at 4:57 PM

      Who else but Derpy!

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    8. AnonymousFebruary 20, 2011 at 7:12 PM

      Oh Derpy. :3

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    9. Cereal VelocityFebruary 20, 2011 at 8:35 PM

      @Anonymous

      Aw, we love you too!

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    10. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2011 at 5:42 AM

      @Anonymous poster number two, which is the fourth post.

      The obsession stems from the fact that some like the TV show.

      If male it's understandable to take it in the pony on pony direction to make it seem okay that your watching the show in the first place.

      If female you will take it in the stallion on stallion direction which we haven't seen much of yet because of who the show is targeting.

      May I suggest Hoity Toity plus Big Mac?

      Or maybe some Fluttershy and Rarity? Haven't seen much of that yet.

      What about Snip and Snails when they get older, they already do a pinkie and the brain routine quite well and just might be hetero life partners.

      Double standards are quite common, thus the next person will probably say something awful about this comment or in trying to avoid saying the negative will try something in the extreme positive. It better be neutral to not step on anyones feet.

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    11. PacceFebruary 26, 2011 at 3:20 PM

      @Anonymous
      Everyone's entitled to their opinion, but I don't think the 2nd anon read the story. There really is NO shipping in this (as I'm not very good at it), it's just Dash wanting to have a sandwich and sleep and everypony pissing her off and then getting a happy ending in the way of somepony's number.
      But yeah, Dash is gay to me. And in the magical land of Equestria, no one cares.
      Someone on 4chan gave me the idea of Dash going grocery shopping and meeting a clerk named Quick Check and I wrote this as a fun little short. I didn't write this to make it "okay to watch the show", I just felt like writing something funny and cute.
      And pony is a species, not a gender.

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    12. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2011 at 1:29 AM

      @Pacce

      True as defined pony is any horse of small size and several differing breeds.

      I was making a suggestion that some people take things too far, like I do... no problems and I would apologize but being anonymous makes that somewhat of a moot point when we all have our opinions.

      Opinions are acceptable except they tend to cause arguments and I like to argue sometimes.(Chaos is fun!)

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    13. Peaches n' CreamMarch 5, 2011 at 11:33 PM

      I emptied your fridge~
      Loved it, short and satisfying. Pacce can even make short stories awesome.

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    14. AnonymousMarch 11, 2011 at 9:53 PM

      bluh, just ONE MORE VOTE!!

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    15. Junaid HussainOctober 8, 2011 at 3:50 PM

      EXTREMELY awkward but cute and adorable, like a pillow with a picture of fluttershy,

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