• Story: Between the Downpour and the Everfree

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    [Normal] Lazy Pegasus ponies failing at storm stopping!
    Summary: Ordinarily Rainbow Dash and her pegasus team have no problem moving clouds, until a storm they can't control blows in from the Everfree Forest. With ponies in danger, the weather team struggling and Twilight's library being used as an emergency shelter, how can they save Ponyville?
    Between the Downpour and the Everfree
    laupäev, 12. veebruar 2011 op
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    8 kommentaari:

    1. Anonüümne12. veebruar 2011, kell 13:43

      I really liked it.

      VastaKustuta
    2. Anonüümne12. veebruar 2011, kell 13:54

      Great story! I really enjoyed it!

      VastaKustuta
    3. Anonüümne12. veebruar 2011, kell 17:38

      Nice work! Great to see more Luna, and Derpy's always fun. I thought you captured the sense of the characters' speech very well.

      One typo: "compliment", not "complement".

      VastaKustuta
    4. Sethisto12. veebruar 2011, kell 22:01

      Super Luna Powers activate?

      VastaKustuta
    5. Anonüümne13. veebruar 2011, kell 02:36

      One complaint from me is the resolution: Luna appears, fixes everything. No drama, no tension. Otherwise: very enjoyable story.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Regal15. veebruar 2011, kell 22:58

      Thank you for the comments everyone. They are appreciated. I'm glad you liked it.

      VastaKustuta
    7. Regal16. veebruar 2011, kell 11:06

      If anyone prefers Google Docs over DeviantArt, I think I've got that figured out now.

      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cZbdOpXBhPkD_Vfu76RcQP4XXoq-6Mcx-skcVvlQrTw/edit?hl=en&authkey=CLrjpbQJ

      VastaKustuta
    8. ItsTheWhinyGuys27. aprill 2011, kell 02:42

      As I said on dA, nice, fun story. It did seem a little bit rushed in certain parts, but yeah, other than that, it was good.

      VastaKustuta

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