• Story: Apples and Acres (Update Chapter 6!)

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    [Grimdark] Applejack time!  Another one not for the faint of heart!

    Author: Anon Writepony
    Description: Applejack's descent into depression and madness, as well as the effects it has on her family. 
    Apples and Acres Chp. 1-3
    Apples And Acres Chp. 4-6 (New!)
    teisipäev, 22. märts 2011 op
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    44 kommentaari:

    1. Anonüümne7. veebruar 2011, kell 23:26

      I wanna read it, but it says I need permission...

      VastaKustuta
    2. Anonymous Writepony7. veebruar 2011, kell 23:31

      @Anonymous

      Author of the story here. Try this link. I think OP must've copied the link from the address bar instead of the "share" link.

      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LOK1VCif5wF2IYJU708_yfQPy5J44m_2dDSmIQAthrw/edit?hl=en&authk
      ey=CPvErpsG

      VastaKustuta
    3. Sethisto7. veebruar 2011, kell 23:43

      @Anonymous

      There are a few people in there reading it now, I am not sure. Maybe try creating a google account.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Sethisto7. veebruar 2011, kell 23:45

      @Anonymous
      Actually I just logged out to see if I could still access it without being logged into google, and still was able to enter. Were you the same person having this trouble with the other story earlier?

      VastaKustuta
    5. Sethisto8. veebruar 2011, kell 03:08

      @Sethisto

      I found a bunch of your posts in the spam folder for some reason, I fixed them.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Anonüümne8. veebruar 2011, kell 09:50

      i cant get to it either

      VastaKustuta
    7. Anonymous Writepony8. veebruar 2011, kell 19:13

      Edited viewing settings. Hopefully everything is sorted out now. Sorry about that.

      VastaKustuta
    8. Anonüümne13. veebruar 2011, kell 17:38

      ...I just want to ask, will there be a happy ending here? I don't like to read Grimdark, because it tends to ruin the show for me sometimes... This story is really good, but I just want to know if it all ends in tragedy. Hope you can tell me...

      VastaKustuta
    9. Anon Writepony13. veebruar 2011, kell 17:44

      @Anonymous

      I wish I could tell you, but doing so would ruin the suspense and the story overall. I can tell you that there are various high points throughout the story while accompanied by those low ones that all grimdark stories have. Whether or not you want to hop along for the whole ride is up to you.

      Glad you enjoy it so far!

      VastaKustuta
    10. Anonüümne13. veebruar 2011, kell 18:52

      @Anon Writepony
      Well, I think I will stick with it. I mean if worst comes to worst I dont like the ending, and that's all. Plus a definitive end will actually help me a bit as my mind tends to wonder quite a bit, especially on these sort of things. I try to complete unfinished stories in my head, and don't always like the results and get hung up on them, but a real end helps me get over it.

      Also, I do quite like the story. Some of the things Applejack says in the newest part seem like the lyrics to a song almost... Hm. While im here, would you mind if I try to do that? Make some song lyrics to it? It would be a great song, about her growing insanity...

      Oh my, I have rambled, haven't I? Sorry about that!

      VastaKustuta
    11. MasterMask15. veebruar 2011, kell 20:36

      @Anonymous
      So I guess no one wants to hear the song? I already wrote a bit...
      Oh well. I'll just wait until the story ends, then. I can keep it to myself. Can't wait for the next part, man.

      Btw, I have a name now!

      VastaKustuta
    12. Anonüümne16. veebruar 2011, kell 01:08

      Some parts seem like how I imagine what it would be like to actually start losing you mind. I sort'a picture the whole "song lyrics" part as being part of the delusion, although I may be wrong about it. Good stuff. I await the next chapter.

      VastaKustuta
    13. Anonüümne21. veebruar 2011, kell 02:30

      I love this! Can't wait for an update. <3

      VastaKustuta
    14. Anonüümne24. veebruar 2011, kell 08:12

      Seconded!

      VastaKustuta
    15. Cottonmouth6. märts 2011, kell 01:54

      Been waiting for this update! Good to see this fic is still being worked on.

      VastaKustuta
    16. Anon Writepony6. märts 2011, kell 02:22

      @Cottonmouth

      Glad you like it! Sorry it took so long to get the update out; I'll definitely work harder to make new chapters release as soon as I possibly can.

      VastaKustuta
    17. Anonüümne6. märts 2011, kell 03:47

      Older Applebloom x Older Spike?.......


      THIS IS WHAT I HAVE WANTED ALL OF MY LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIFE. DEAR GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD.

      YES YES YES. OH MY GOD ITS SO GOOD.

      Can't wait for next chapter. Thank you for writing.

      VastaKustuta
    18. Anonüümne6. märts 2011, kell 05:03

      I've been waiting for this! Thanks for continuing, keep it coming!

      VastaKustuta
    19. Anonüümne6. märts 2011, kell 08:29

      The waiting will soon be over...

      VastaKustuta
    20. Naxts6. märts 2011, kell 20:13

      Wow. I'm in awe. This is a really good story! I just can't wait to see the next part, this story is just so suspenceful. Its scary almost.

      VastaKustuta
    21. Anonüümne6. märts 2011, kell 21:27

      I'm reading too much grimdark D:

      This is very good. I love the whole *spoiler for people who haven't read any of it and are lame enough to check the comments first* part!

      VastaKustuta
    22. Gig7. märts 2011, kell 08:29

      I'm really liking this story. To be honest, I prefer the psychological aspects of a grimdark fanfic rather than gore and violence. This is doing a perfect job of being dark and suspenseful without incorporating brutality. I'm looking forward to the rest of this.

      VastaKustuta
    23. Anonüümne7. märts 2011, kell 11:51

      I like this story but with so many characters speaking with a harsh Southern dialect, it is kind of hard to read.

      VastaKustuta
    24. CrimeofKicking16. märts 2011, kell 22:53

      wow... Next to Normal and MLP.
      Two great tastes and whatnot!

      Great story so far.

      VastaKustuta
    25. Cottonmouth22. märts 2011, kell 22:37

      I don't trust Doctors, and I don't think I should trust this one either.

      We'll see. Good job and I'm looking forward to chapter 7.

      VastaKustuta
    26. Hikuro1422. märts 2011, kell 22:59

      Looks to be a promising story. I normally don't read grimdark stories, but this one has potential.

      VastaKustuta
    27. Epona23. märts 2011, kell 00:21

      crosses fingers for appledash ship next chapters**

      VastaKustuta
    28. Anonüümne23. märts 2011, kell 13:15

      Did you really have to call the doctor "Madden"? Now I can't get that freakin' video out of my head whenever I read this story.

      VastaKustuta
    29. Stahi23. märts 2011, kell 14:31

      @Anonymous

      aeiou

      VastaKustuta
    30. Naxts23. märts 2011, kell 18:00

      I've been waiting for a really long time for this update. Though unfortunately. I don't really think that the new chapter really... Delivered.
      But still. I really like this story and I'm really interested in seeing what happens next.

      VastaKustuta
    31. smexypony18. mai 2011, kell 14:17

      this is pretty interesting.
      when do you plan on finishing this, anon writepony? please say you plan on doing so

      VastaKustuta
    32. Nope31. mai 2011, kell 18:52

      Darn it all, chapter 4-6 I can't access because they "violate our ToS". Any chance there's an alternate link? I hate leaving a story unread D:

      VastaKustuta
    33. Anonüümne2. juuni 2011, kell 06:01

      Yeah, CAN'T GET TO CHAPTERS 4-6. THEY VIOLATE THE TOS OR SOME BULLSHIT.
      But yes, nopony can acess the final three chapters, still.

      I DEMAND this to be fixed... if... that's okay. It's a good read.

      VastaKustuta
    34. Anonüümne2. juuni 2011, kell 22:40

      I cant view chapters 4 to 6. Google Docs says its in violation of the TOS?

      VastaKustuta
    35. Anonüümne3. juuni 2011, kell 16:57

      epicly brilliant story so far, had me close to tears D:. but same problem as everyone else with chapters 4-6 =/.

      VastaKustuta
    36. Ddude283. juuni 2011, kell 23:15

      I can read them just fine.

      VastaKustuta
    37. Anonüümne4. juuni 2011, kell 00:43

      "We're sorry. You can't access this document because it is in violation of our Terms of Service."



      ...FFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-

      VastaKustuta
    38. Nope5. juuni 2011, kell 16:33

      Ah good, I can read 4-6 now. Gonna have to read 1-3 again to refresh my memory, but if said memory serves, that ain't a bad thing. ONWARD TO READING!

      VastaKustuta
    39. Anon Writepony16. juuni 2011, kell 03:39

      Hey everypony!

      Thanks so much for liking the story, and I apologize for having not updated it in such a long time. I still don't know when I'll be able to update it next, seeing as how the upcoming chapter will be incredibly lengthy.

      The main reason for this hiatus is because of the work I'm pouring into My Little Musical; I prefer focusing on one thing at a time, and unfortunately, MLM has been demanding more of my attention.

      Sorry and thanks again!

      VastaKustuta
    40. Roxor21. juuni 2011, kell 11:15

      Should I feel bad for enjoying the Sanity Slippage scenes?

      VastaKustuta
    41. Anonüümne24. juuni 2011, kell 12:41

      Man, I am LOVING the interaction between Spike and Applebloom.

      VastaKustuta
    42. La Barata17. juuli 2011, kell 01:24

      ...So, gonna finish it?

      VastaKustuta
    43. Ddude2818. juuli 2011, kell 10:21

      Yeah I was wondering that too. Is this going to get finished?

      VastaKustuta
    44. La Barata2. september 2011, kell 00:00

      Yeah, dude. I've got brain damage, and I've been updating my fic. What's your excuse?

      VastaKustuta

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