• Story: Admiration

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    [Shipping][Grimdark]  Shipping AND Grimdark?!  This one will be hell for the archive.
    Description: A story about one pony's love for another and how she will do anything to keep it.
    Admiration
    esmaspäev, 14. veebruar 2011 op
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    9 kommentaari:

    1. Anonüümne14. veebruar 2011, kell 17:59

      Goddamn that was depressing.

      VastaKustuta
    2. Rent5dogs14. veebruar 2011, kell 19:04

      @Anonymous

      But it was great.

      VastaKustuta
    3. Anonüümne14. veebruar 2011, kell 22:57

      Depressing but well written.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Anonüümne15. veebruar 2011, kell 01:13

      Good read but it was a little confusing at a few points due to terminology. Was beginning to wonder if they were supposed to be human or pony form towards the end.

      VastaKustuta
    5. Mads15. veebruar 2011, kell 06:34

      Good story, if depressing. Could use a thorough read-through to get those last few spelling mistakes, such as 'to' instead of 'too' and vice versa. One thumb, might read again.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Zarkanorf6. märts 2011, kell 12:54

      A few grammatical and spelling errors aside, this story was incredible! I never thought of grimdark/shipping to work together so wonderfully, and yet you've woven this tapestry of desperation and lust and...

      Man, I want to give you four stars, but those little things are what's holding me back. Great job, Thel!

      VastaKustuta
    7. Anonüümne30. märts 2011, kell 04:54

      meh...

      VastaKustuta
    8. La Barata13. juuni 2011, kell 18:44

      O_o;

      VastaKustuta
    9. Pinkie's_assistant25. november 2011, kell 19:54

      I am actually in that same situation. I hate it and I hope ashy doesn't take it the same way bon bon does >-<

      VastaKustuta

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