• Balderdash

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    [Normal] Sad Dash!?  Impossible.

    Author: Tanner
    Description: A story about Rainbow Dash going through a horrible accident and trying to cope with the results
    Balderdash
    neljapäev, 17. veebruar 2011 op
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    7 kommentaari:

    1. yrthak17. veebruar 2011, kell 15:49

      Nice work! I'm curious about the downburst, is that a real thing that happens?

      ...Also, is it sad that I was hoping for a bit of shipping? Yeah, probably.

      VastaKustuta
    2. Toby17. veebruar 2011, kell 17:10

      I was really confused at the beginning, and as I read it a second time, I realize the beginning paragraph is a dream. I thought it was what really happened and I was wondering why she wasn't trying to figure out who tied her wings!

      VastaKustuta
    3. Tanner17. veebruar 2011, kell 19:17

      Downbursts are a real weather thing (which is cool) and I admit its way too unclear in the beginning that its a fevered dream dash is having in the hospital. As for the shipping I did write an alternate ending for the story, if anyone wants to read that.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Anonüümne19. veebruar 2011, kell 04:03

      @Tanner
      I definitely do.

      VastaKustuta
    5. Wierdplatformer14. juuni 2011, kell 03:14

      Not enough comments! It seemed to be resolved a bit too fast, but otherwise a great story!

      VastaKustuta
    6. G.15. juuni 2011, kell 02:41

      I was confused about the rope thing too. I didn't realize that scene was supposed to be a dream until reading the comment section here after I finished the story.

      Seemed a bit rushed. Keeping Dash grounded for awhile would have helped the pacing and enhanced the drama of the narrative. The solution just came to easily for what was made out to be an enormous problem.

      VastaKustuta
    7. Anonüümne30. juuni 2011, kell 10:46

      Heat blasts can happen anywhere, so the accident really had nothing to do with Dash's recklessness. In fact, if she'd been higher up in the sky like she normally is, things would've been a lot worse.

      VastaKustuta

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