[Normal] Hell yah Great and Powerful Trixie! I don't know how you stay so popular with only one episode under your belt but I wouldn't have it any other way!
Summary: BEHOLD! The shocking truth about the Great and Powerful Trixie! GASP IN AWE at the tragic secret behind her magic! SHAKE WITH FEAR at the revelation of her true motives! All in this MIND-SHATTERING tale! Brace yourselves, for this story is told in a way no pony fic has been told before! No, really! You don't think I'm boasting, do you? Do you? Guys?
The Liar
10 comments:
That... That made me feel real sad.
ReplyDeleteWow.
ReplyDeleteThat was really well put together!
Wait, I am confus with the formatting; is every paragraph going BACK in time?
ReplyDelete@bubsAKAvermin That's the idea. Each paragraph takes place before the one above it.
ReplyDeleteI'm thinking I might revise the story to make this clearer, though I'm not quite sure how.
Hot damn Chopper. What a story!
ReplyDelete5 stars
Damnit, this story is absolutely genius. It's sad that many more people will never read this, because it's IMO as good as some of the short 6-star stories. I've never seen a story done this way, and it's done perfectly.
ReplyDeleteThis is definitely better than some 6-star stuff I've read here, and not because it's too easy to get a 6-star rating.
ReplyDeleteA few small typos, and the format is at times confusing: I think, for clarity's sake, it might have been better to combine a few paragraphs, given the reverse-order format. This being said, I absolutely loved this story, and I think it clearly deserves much, much more attention than it has received.
I put this story off for so long because I really don't understand Trixie's popularity. Now that I've read it I can say that this is one of the best stories I've read on here. It was so unique. The order of the paragraphs shouldn't be reversed, since It's the build up from all the preceding paragraphs that makes the next one (and especially the last one) *shades* so great and powerful. I must admit, manly tears were shed after that last paragraph.
ReplyDeleteNow I'll probably just be disappointed by any other Trixie story.
5 stars for sure. I wish this story would get the attention it deserves.
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ReplyDeleteAlso, this story really needs a sad tag.
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