• Story: Swayback Mountain

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    [Shipping] More Lesbian pony shipping. You could probably figure that out from the title though!
    Description: Applejack/Rarity, Needs official Description
    Swayback Mountain

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    Monday, January 31, 2011 op
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    28 comments:

    1. Nikorasu SoraFebruary 13, 2011 at 6:21 PM

      Awesome...just...awesome...

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    2. AnonymousFebruary 16, 2011 at 4:27 AM

      SOOOOOO LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG

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    3. AnonymousFebruary 16, 2011 at 4:59 AM

      1d brought back horrible, horrible, muscle description memories. SNAKESONASORA *massive shudder*

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    4. AnonymousFebruary 16, 2011 at 5:15 AM

      so did rainbow dash...PLAN THIS?!?!?!

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    5. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2011 at 2:44 AM

      Clearly, Ditzy Doo was the grand architect.

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    6. AnonymousMarch 3, 2011 at 3:21 PM

      Here's the DA version of it... One continuous piece rather than a series of screenshots :

      http://buttersc0tchsundae.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d38u3ir

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    7. Everchosen April 6, 2011 at 11:41 AM

      Argh! I just slapped myself! I just read half of your story...
      I like "normal" stories lol

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    8. AnonymousApril 16, 2011 at 1:09 PM

      Definitely an interesting dynamic between the two characters. The whole story happened very naturally- that's something missing from most ship stories.

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    9. Moar BoarApril 22, 2011 at 10:17 PM

      You have successfully filled Moar Boar's need of Applejack x Rarity shipping.

      Good Job. :)

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    10. AnonymousApril 23, 2011 at 11:01 AM

      Man, now I need rain, too. COLD rain, and a lot of it.

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    11. AnonymousApril 28, 2011 at 6:58 PM

      A shipping fic!
      I'll READ it!
      NO ONE WILL EVER KNOW!

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    12. AnonymousMay 18, 2011 at 4:33 PM

      This fic wasn't problem free for me. I stumbled over the beginning at a few parts where point of view shifts were a bit jarring or the descriptions of the feelings violated writing guidelines.

      You did, however, deftly handle the descriptions or romance with beauty, and introduced some backstory to AJ that was interesting and I was sad to see it not really go anywhere after the make out.

      So, imperfect, but good. Still quite a rarity.

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    13. AnonymousMay 22, 2011 at 5:54 AM

      i cried more times than i thought possible. bravo

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    14. iisawJune 18, 2011 at 1:14 PM

      Brilliant! And thanks for the MOBI format!

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    15. KkatJune 23, 2011 at 5:53 PM

      Thank you again, Buttersc0tch Sundae. Applejack/Rarity has probably become my favorite coupling, and your story is largely responsible.

      This story is beautiful, and supremely well done. The characters are wonderfully in-form. But we get a deeper look into our favorite ponies, featuring a peek into the childhood and heart of Applejack.

      There were heart-wrenching moments throughout, and a warm, tender ending.

      And I really want to see these two together more.

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    16. WisecatJune 25, 2011 at 12:30 PM

      Very cute story, I really liked it. Good job ;)

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    17. AnonymousJuly 18, 2011 at 11:07 AM

      /)^ɛ^(\ so awesome

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    18. ToonNinjaJuly 18, 2011 at 11:08 AM

      Love this story. Seriously, this is headcanon, if only because it's written so well.

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    19. Whirl WindJuly 18, 2011 at 12:16 PM

      I loved this just as much reading it now as I did when it was posted, it is very well done.

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    20. Flygon16July 18, 2011 at 12:51 PM

      Ok, this has GOT to be a conspiracy. All the RariJack stuff last week made me think of this story again, and then it just so happens to pop up here. This is obviously some twisted plot to distract me from getting anything accomplished by overloading me with my OTP. Well congratulations, because it's working :P

      In other news, awesome story is still awesome.

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    21. WhiteoutJuly 18, 2011 at 1:00 PM

      Good to see this getting more attention, I'm not big on Rarity and AJ, but Butterscotch has persuaded me to read pairings I'm not sure on more than once now!

      And I'm still half-sure Rainbow knows what's up. The Dash knows all.

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    22. Nova25July 18, 2011 at 11:49 PM

      What's MOBI and EPUB ?

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    23. Colt.45August 5, 2011 at 6:09 AM

      Wow, I did not expect that to be so beautiful and honest. I keep expecting to read an annoying love-story on here, but you ponies keep making me "d'aaaw" with a glimpse of stirring love. I definitely like the Applejack/Rarity dynamic now, and i'll certainly keep this fic in mind when deciding my favorite ship-couples. Well done.

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    24. AnonymousAugust 20, 2011 at 10:16 AM

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    25. AnonymousAugust 20, 2011 at 11:01 AM

      Cute. Loved the "fade" between annoying each other and loving each other. I'm very glad it was posted here otherwise I'd have missed out on a beautiful fan-fiction! Thanks for posting this. ^^

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    26. Wilson BennettAugust 25, 2011 at 10:37 PM

      I loved this story, butterscotch, I'm still confused about what rainbow meant by "betting on her" but whatever works

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    27. That1guyDecember 22, 2011 at 10:08 PM

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    28. That1guyDecember 22, 2011 at 10:11 PM

      For anypony who doesn't know, this is based off of "Brokeback Mountain", a short-story and film about two bi-curious cowboys. Herp-a-derp.

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