• Story: Porcelain Secrets

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    [Normal] (Nathan !!eFuOgyMIEPo) over at /co/ finished his Porcelain Secrets Fanfic.  Nothing gross here!  Check it out if you are into Applebloom or Spike!


    Porcelain Secrets Part 1
    Porcelain Secrets Part 2
    Porcelain Secrets Part 3
    kolmapäev, 19. jaanuar 2011 op
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    22 kommentaari:

    1. Anonüümne21. jaanuar 2011, kell 02:54

      go on...

      VastaKustuta
    2. Nathan Shepard21. jaanuar 2011, kell 13:34

      Nathan here. Pointing out that the fanfic is not yet finished. Last part due by latter tonight if not earlier.

      VastaKustuta
    3. Sethisto22. jaanuar 2011, kell 14:48

      fix'd

      VastaKustuta
    4. madmax1. veebruar 2011, kell 07:33

      reading.....reading...
      that is supes man!

      VastaKustuta
    5. Pacce2. veebruar 2011, kell 13:17

      And once again, the day is saved, thanks to FRIENDSHIP!

      VastaKustuta
    6. Anonüümne7. veebruar 2011, kell 21:50

      One of my favorite pieces of Pony-fiction. Mostly for Spike/Bloom.

      Great job.

      VastaKustuta
    7. Cereal Velocity8. veebruar 2011, kell 10:17

      Finally got around to reading this. Well done! You nailed Apple Bloom's accent pretty well, and that last line was cute. If I had to pick something to critique, I'd say that sometimes you switched to different locations in the story without a whole lot of padding or explanation. It was a little jarring, but nothing that broke the narrative.

      VastaKustuta
    8. Squeak16. veebruar 2011, kell 16:06

      Aww, I finally got around to this, and I loved it! There is not enough Spike/Apple Bloom in the world. I think you pulled off the dialog perfectly, and as Cereal said the last line mad me D'awwww hard. Great stuff, in character as always!

      VastaKustuta
    9. Darkhawk127. veebruar 2011, kell 00:44

      Great. I got type two diabetes from looking at the page picture. Thanks, jerk!

      Oh, who am I kidding, I can't stay mad looking at that. D'awwwwwwwwwwww...

      VastaKustuta
    10. Zarkanorf6. märts 2011, kell 17:48

      THE FIRST PONYFICTION EVER PUBLISHED ON EQUESTRIA DAILY! *ooooo's, aaaaaahh's, and UUUUUUUU's)

      Now the low amount of grammatical and spelling errors, the accurate characterization of the... character, and the overall look of the story really makes Porcelain Secrets a "standard" on what writers should aim for. I'm not saying "rite spike/bloom an'd u b gud" (although some more from this pairing would be adorable), but the way this story is structured just...

      Fuck explaining; to me, this story is the bar that you either get a 4 or a 3 from me (note the grammatical/spelling errors this story has; if you really looked, you might've found maybe two of them). I love this story.

      VastaKustuta
    11. Anonüümne27. märts 2011, kell 00:49

      Wow, this was amazing! It almost feels like a real episode.

      VastaKustuta
    12. Cosmonaut27. märts 2011, kell 22:43

      What a cute story! 5 stars!

      VastaKustuta
    13. Anonüümne8. aprill 2011, kell 19:21

      My eyes almost blged out of my head when Applejack mentioned getting a "switch" for Apple Bloom. That honestly doesn't seem like something that would go down in Ponyville...

      Other than that, though, an excellent story :)

      VastaKustuta
    14. supervanman644. mai 2011, kell 11:49

      I don't know why, but I've always loved this pairing. And this is a great story. :3

      VastaKustuta
    15. Zarkanorf10. juuni 2011, kell 21:47

      test

      VastaKustuta
    16. ItsTheWhinyGuys18. juuli 2011, kell 23:53

      This was all perfectly in character, and the end was d'awww. Very nice read!

      VastaKustuta
    17. Taylor24. juuli 2011, kell 23:42

      This is an awesome fan fic. I was wondering where the comic I found about this came from. Good to see the whole story was just as cute as it was!

      VastaKustuta
    18. Umandsf12. august 2011, kell 20:00

      I know this is very off-topic, but I feel I have to say this? Is it just me or have I seen this exact same artwork way before the onset of these particular ponies?

      VastaKustuta
    19. DarthVader19. september 2011, kell 11:18

      Wow. EqD's first Fan Fic. Very adorable.

      VastaKustuta
    20. von Boomslang5. oktoober 2011, kell 19:09

      Loved it. Also, *pout* want more.

      VastaKustuta
    21. Anonüümne9. juuli 2012, kell 08:56

      DYK: This appears to be the first story on EQD.

      VastaKustuta
    22. Unknown9. august 2012, kell 09:21

      Wow this is old they talking about /co/

      VastaKustuta

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