• Story: Hand Me Downs

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    [Normal] The Story of Applebloom's bow, written by Elric and uploaded to Deviant Art.  It originated on /co/, and is therefore is considered "cool" unlike most DA fics! Written by "Elric"
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     Hand Me Downs


    Friday, January 21, 2011 op
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    10 comments:

    1. AnonymousMarch 1, 2011 at 12:06 PM

      That was very sweet. Loved it.

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    2. FasterThenRainbowsApril 16, 2011 at 9:02 PM

      Wow...that's heavy...

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    3. AnonymousMay 7, 2011 at 11:25 AM

      Aw, cute. You could use some clean up with tense agreement and dialogue grammar, though.

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    4. Danfish77May 8, 2011 at 7:36 PM

      A ribbon passed from generation to generation? They must take real good care of it...

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    5. AnonymousJune 5, 2011 at 11:17 PM

      Sweet, but needs a LOT of editing. The grammar structure is in bad shape, it was almost unreadable for me.

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    6. WierdplatformerJune 14, 2011 at 3:52 AM

      Short, yet sweet! Just like an Apple should be.

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    7. patroisonJuly 9, 2011 at 10:17 PM

      This was really cute. I wonder will ever delve into how Applejack's parents died. (Though to be honest I don't think I'd have the heart to read it.)

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    8. Colt.45July 11, 2011 at 2:30 AM

      Very touching, well portrayed emotion. It was a beautiful gesture, and I'll always remember this story when I see the two ponies together. I kinda got choked up a moment there, when Applebloom asked if Applejack loved her. Good stuff.

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    9. AnonymousJuly 29, 2011 at 2:01 PM

      cute. enough said. Good work Big Mac.

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    10. trelatyraelisAugust 14, 2011 at 3:45 PM

      It was beautiful.
      I really mean it. I don't think I can describe the warmth i felt in my heart with just a simple message.
      I really don't understand why this doesn't get the love it deserves.

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