• Story: Hand Me Downs

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    [Normal] The Story of Applebloom's bow, written by Elric and uploaded to Deviant Art.  It originated on /co/, and is therefore is considered "cool" unlike most DA fics! Written by "Elric"
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     Hand Me Downs


    reede, 21. jaanuar 2011 op
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    10 kommentaari:

    1. Anonüümne1. märts 2011, kell 12:06

      That was very sweet. Loved it.

      VastaKustuta
    2. FasterThenRainbows16. aprill 2011, kell 21:02

      Wow...that's heavy...

      VastaKustuta
    3. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 11:25

      Aw, cute. You could use some clean up with tense agreement and dialogue grammar, though.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Danfish778. mai 2011, kell 19:36

      A ribbon passed from generation to generation? They must take real good care of it...

      VastaKustuta
    5. Anonüümne5. juuni 2011, kell 23:17

      Sweet, but needs a LOT of editing. The grammar structure is in bad shape, it was almost unreadable for me.

      VastaKustuta
    6. Wierdplatformer14. juuni 2011, kell 03:52

      Short, yet sweet! Just like an Apple should be.

      VastaKustuta
    7. patroison9. juuli 2011, kell 22:17

      This was really cute. I wonder will ever delve into how Applejack's parents died. (Though to be honest I don't think I'd have the heart to read it.)

      VastaKustuta
    8. Colt.4511. juuli 2011, kell 02:30

      Very touching, well portrayed emotion. It was a beautiful gesture, and I'll always remember this story when I see the two ponies together. I kinda got choked up a moment there, when Applebloom asked if Applejack loved her. Good stuff.

      VastaKustuta
    9. Anonüümne29. juuli 2011, kell 14:01

      cute. enough said. Good work Big Mac.

      VastaKustuta
    10. trelatyraelis14. august 2011, kell 15:45

      It was beautiful.
      I really mean it. I don't think I can describe the warmth i felt in my heart with just a simple message.
      I really don't understand why this doesn't get the love it deserves.

      VastaKustuta

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