[Grimdark][Sad] Moar pony stories, lots of Fluttershy today finally.
Fluttershy's Despair
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Monday, January 31, 2011 op 7:04 PM
Labels: Author: A Man Who Shall Keep His Promises, Fanfiction, Fluttershy, Grimdark, Sad, Star-4, Story
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Whoa! There's a real big problem with that bottom part! Text on the left is unreadable due to being cut-off.
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ReplyDeleteWow, thank you for pointing that out.
I fixed it.
Ahh see thats why I like google docs! I can be lazy while you fix it for me lol.
ReplyDeleteThis would fall under "sad: as well?
ReplyDeleteThis is the sequel to Fluttershy's Courage, isn't it?
ReplyDeleteNot sequel. Counterpoint.
ReplyDeleteCounterpoint in this is what COULD have happened if Fluttershy's Courage had failed in the story of the same name.
ReplyDeleteI wish I could get in contact with the author for a private critique. Strong and dark story with a glimmer of hope at the end, but there are things he could do to make it stronger and less anticlimatic.
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteI have to agree with this. After the strong start the ending seemed very... flat. It was good, but the ending let it down.
Aww :(. All my favorites had to die :(. No really... even Derpy.
ReplyDeleteill admit it. this made me cry.
ReplyDeleteill admit it. this made me cry.
ReplyDeleteWas kinda boring
ReplyDelete@WPK4F I am currently crying manly man-tears of manliness.
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