• Story: Fluttershy's Despair

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    [Grimdark][Sad] Moar pony stories, lots of Fluttershy today finally.

    Fluttershy's Despair
    esmaspäev, 31. jaanuar 2011 op
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    13 kommentaari:

    1. Anonüümne31. jaanuar 2011, kell 19:08

      Whoa! There's a real big problem with that bottom part! Text on the left is unreadable due to being cut-off.

      VastaKustuta
    2. Man that Shall Keep His Promise31. jaanuar 2011, kell 19:15

      @Anonymous

      Wow, thank you for pointing that out.
      I fixed it.

      VastaKustuta
    3. Sethisto31. jaanuar 2011, kell 19:16

      Ahh see thats why I like google docs! I can be lazy while you fix it for me lol.

      VastaKustuta
    4. Sleepingcobrox9. märts 2011, kell 22:22

      This would fall under "sad: as well?

      VastaKustuta
    5. Anonüümne19. märts 2011, kell 00:15

      This is the sequel to Fluttershy's Courage, isn't it?

      VastaKustuta
    6. Anonüümne6. mai 2011, kell 13:22

      Not sequel. Counterpoint.

      VastaKustuta
    7. Anonüümne7. mai 2011, kell 11:52

      Counterpoint in this is what COULD have happened if Fluttershy's Courage had failed in the story of the same name.

      I wish I could get in contact with the author for a private critique. Strong and dark story with a glimmer of hope at the end, but there are things he could do to make it stronger and less anticlimatic.

      VastaKustuta
    8. Lilly18. mai 2011, kell 04:58

      @Anonymous

      I have to agree with this. After the strong start the ending seemed very... flat. It was good, but the ending let it down.

      VastaKustuta
    9. Anonüümne2. august 2011, kell 14:38

      Aww :(. All my favorites had to die :(. No really... even Derpy.

      VastaKustuta
    10. Anonüümne9. august 2011, kell 03:03

      ill admit it. this made me cry.

      VastaKustuta
    11. Anonymous9. august 2011, kell 03:36

      ill admit it. this made me cry.

      VastaKustuta
    12. Anonüümne26. detsember 2011, kell 13:24

      Was kinda boring

      VastaKustuta
    13. Pinkiepieisbestpony13. jaanuar 2012, kell 20:21

      @WPK4F I am currently crying manly man-tears of manliness.

      VastaKustuta

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